The Zombie who terrorized the town

cats: England, Primary

Joshua Sterley Aged: 8
Centre: Sutton NumberWorks’nWords

The Zombie who terrorized the town

The town of Eek was peaceful until this gigantic, green, slimy zombie came out of no where! He was slaughtering thousands of humans and animals. When I saw this out of my double glazed window, I quickly ran to fetch my smooth, black phone and dialled the number for the monster hunter.

The monster hunter came very fast but it was too late, As the zombie had gone deep into the dark, misty forest. Luckily, he left his footprints behind, so the monster hunter was able to set a trap. We could just make out the zombie, when all of a sudden the monster hunter took out his brown and silver shotgun and shot the zombie in his leg. Then the hunter released the cage and the zombie was trapped. We dropped the silver cage into the shiny, blue waters of the Atlantic Ocean and that was the end of that.

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10 Responses to “The Zombie who terrorized the town”

  1. Karen shean says:
    March 22, 2011 at 4:12 am

    Very good imagination and use of adjectives. Hard to believe this child is only 8.

  2. C Holmes says:
    March 23, 2011 at 4:47 am

    Excellent standard

  3. Pharnie says:
    March 23, 2011 at 8:18 am

    Very well thought out
    Brilliant Joshua.

  4. Wayne says:
    March 24, 2011 at 12:37 am

    Well done Joshua!

  5. bjshean says:
    March 24, 2011 at 4:59 am

    An excellent story Joshua!

  6. annes says:
    March 24, 2011 at 10:04 am

    Great story!

  7. Claire shean says:
    April 4, 2011 at 3:03 am

    Impressive stuff! Well done!

  8. Tiffany Potgieter says:
    April 4, 2011 at 3:26 am

    Good work!

  9. Timothy Brophy says:
    April 4, 2011 at 3:33 am

    Well done

  10. Cobus Lombard says:
    April 4, 2011 at 3:41 am

    Very good Josh!