The Magic Adventure

Poppy Parry age 6
The Magic Adventure

Jack went to space he explored the space. Then he saw his friend Tom. Tom had bought a ball and some sandwiches. So they played catch in pace then they saw a space man who was floating around and the space man said “Hi I am a space man” Jack and Tom said “We are little boys.”Tom said “I have brought some sandwiches, would you like one?” The space man said “yes please”.


Jack, Tom and the spaceman who was called Big Billy because he was so big, had an absolutely brilliant game of catch. At 2 o’clock just as they were about to stop for a drink, Big Billy noticed a little girl who was crying so much that she had made her dress wet with all the tears. The three of them went over to see what was making her so very upset and unhappy. When she spoke they could not understand her. Jack said she must “speak a different language.” Suddenly the space man spoke in the same language because he thinks the girl was French.


She tells him that she can’t find her parents as their rocket crashed then she couldn’t find them. They pl ay with her and find out that her name is Annabelle. They have a lovely time playing and finally at 4 o’clock her parents come and find her. Jack offered if Big Billy, Annabelle and her parents wanted to come back to Earth on their Dad’s rocket. They said that they would and then they went onto the rocket and went to their house for tea.

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10 Responses to “The Magic Adventure”

  1. claireparry says:

    Well done Pops!

  2. francesca1 says:

    Great story, very well done.

  3. Jac and Heidi says:

    Beautifully written and with such vivid imagination! Super!

  4. Louise Lawson says:

    What a lovely well written story !, well done Poppy Parry xxx

  5. Lynn Evans says:

    Excellent story Poppy well done!! xxx

  6. Sally Leon says:

    What a fantastic magic adventure!

  7. kevin says:

    Well Done Poppy your story was excellent … much better than everyone else’s! You must make your Mum and Dad very proud of you. x x Kevin & Sarah

  8. sanabil says:

    Well done Poppy!!!Fantastic story. Sanabil & Lulu

  9. emmawiley says:

    What a brilliant story Poppy. Amelia and Jonathan love it! xxx

  10. Agg says:

    Hello Poppy,
    Your story is wonderful … Everyone here in Greece loved it and we wish you good luck. xxxxxxxxxxx