Miss Cavill Thinks I’m Listening

cats: England, Primary

Mia Kaye Aged: 6
Centre: Sutton NumberWorks’nWords

Miss Cavill Thinks I’m Listening

I’m sat in Miss Cavill’s class, it’s Geography and I hate Geography!
Miss Cavill thinks I’m listening but I’m not. My magic bus is in my pocket.

My magic bus is a small red bus that my mummy got me for my birthday.
She doesn’t know that it takes me on magical journeys; but it does!
My magic bus glows and gets bigger and suddenly it takes me to India!
India is beautiful!

I see gigantic, blue elephants and all sorts of different buildings. It’s lovely in India. Then I hear the bell which means the bus has to take me back to school.
I feel sad because I loved my adventure but it’s art tomorrow and I love playing with the glitter glue. I wonder where my bus will take me next time?

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38 Responses to “Miss Cavill Thinks I’m Listening”

  1. Alana Cavill says:
    March 19, 2011 at 11:36 pm

    What a fantastic story!

  2. Maria Vidal says:
    March 20, 2011 at 10:33 pm

    I think it would be a wonderful thing to fly around the world in a magical bus when we feel bored. I love your story Mia and hope you write lots more for us to enjoy xx

  3. Robert Eyre-Brook says:
    March 22, 2011 at 4:44 am

    Well Done Mia for writing such a lovely story. I look forward to reading more. I’d like a magic bus like yours! We’ve got lots of ideas at school for making your Geography more interesting so you will enjoy it as much as you do wrting great stories!! Maybe you could be an author when you grow up!

  4. nielsbohr says:
    March 22, 2011 at 12:10 pm

    A lovely story! A wonderful idea to escape your boring class in a magical bus.

  5. Superk8 says:
    March 22, 2011 at 12:20 pm

    Wonderful story Mia! Cant wait to read where the bus takes you next time :o )

  6. butlins says:
    March 22, 2011 at 12:28 pm

    Well done Mia. This is an excellent story and I love your imagination.

    When i’m bored i disappear to other places too, but i don’t have a red bus like you!

    Keep up the good work, keep usposted of where you go next week!

  7. dominique says:
    March 24, 2011 at 7:25 am

    fab mia good imagination well done

  8. viv says:
    March 24, 2011 at 9:24 am

    Mia I love this story and I know just how hard you worked on it! Well done, we are all very proud of you!! x x

  9. annes says:
    March 24, 2011 at 10:02 am

    Love it!

  10. jryan9 says:
    March 25, 2011 at 4:17 am

    Please let me know where I can buy a Magic Red Bus!! Thanks Mis for a great read, Well Done!! xx

  11. lizi says:
    March 25, 2011 at 11:28 am

    Go Mia! I loved reading this! What fun you must have on a magic bus, maybe i can come with you one day! Im so proud of you, and love you very much xxx

  12. jamiejohn says:
    March 25, 2011 at 11:54 am

    i love this story Mia its fantastic! well done x

  13. Miss Henton says:
    March 26, 2011 at 4:17 am

    What a lovely story – must be her wonderful phonics teacher!!!!! Well done Mia!

  14. lyndsayy says:
    March 26, 2011 at 6:09 am

    i love it Mia. Well done. xx

  15. sbwake says:
    March 26, 2011 at 10:47 am

    i love this story, Mia its brilliant well done x

  16. jude says:
    March 26, 2011 at 7:44 pm

    lovely story Mia – I think I would like to borrow your magic bus – Jude

  17. Lucie says:
    March 27, 2011 at 6:10 am

    This is fantastic! Really imaginative and open for a sequel! ;)

  18. Keara says:
    March 27, 2011 at 6:25 am

    Such a brilliant story Mia! I’m so proud of you darling. xx

  19. groundelleng says:
    March 28, 2011 at 2:50 am

    it se4med like someone older than six wrote it. really good :)

  20. tasha says:
    March 29, 2011 at 9:25 pm

    Well done Mia, Love your story. x

  21. Sheree Moore says:
    March 30, 2011 at 6:27 am

    Fantastic story Mia I can’t wait for your next story about the Magic Bus xx

  22. Hils Bindi says:
    March 31, 2011 at 3:04 am

    Well done Mia. I loved reading your story. If only I had had a magic bus to take me away when I was at school.

  23. ayoung28 says:
    March 31, 2011 at 6:16 am

    Well done Mia! What a great story and well done for reading it to Key Stage 2. They were very impressed. You should feel very proud of yourself.
    Good luck!!
    Mr Young

  24. cwright says:
    March 31, 2011 at 12:19 pm

    What a fantastic story Mia, Well Done. xx

  25. kathryn says:
    April 1, 2011 at 5:11 am

    What a great story Mia! I would love to go on that bus someday x

  26. sue whitman says:
    April 1, 2011 at 7:41 pm

    What a fantastic story Mia. Well done :-)

  27. Ruth Williams says:
    April 1, 2011 at 10:55 pm

    lovely story mia, hope you win on this, because its brilliant, hope your next bus adventure is good too. Good Luck
    Ruth x

  28. Paul Smith says:
    April 3, 2011 at 1:50 am

    Fantastic story Mia I’d love to read some more stories about your trips on the magic bus :o )

    Mr Smith

  29. rachyb says:
    April 6, 2011 at 2:15 am

    Beautiful! Really made me smile! Next time your off on an adventure do u think you could take me with you? Xx

  30. Judy Hayes says:
    April 6, 2011 at 3:47 am

    Well done Mia, lovely story. Good luck x

  31. sienna says:
    April 6, 2011 at 5:29 am

    I really enjoyed your story Mia, looking forward to hearing more about your magical adventures!
    Good Luck I hope you win.

    Asher Fowler

  32. samwillard says:
    April 6, 2011 at 6:43 am

    Excellent story Mia! Well done! Sam x

  33. delores says:
    April 6, 2011 at 8:05 am

    Most entertaining great job Mia!!

    I’m rooting for you dee xxx

  34. sgreig says:
    April 6, 2011 at 4:31 pm

    well done Mia – thats such a great story……..i wish i had a magic red bus :-) )

  35. davidhanmer says:
    April 6, 2011 at 8:46 pm

    Fantastic Mia, one of the best stories i have read in a long time. We are all so very proud of you, love David xx P.s Can you teach me how to splle xx

  36. mhellis says:
    April 6, 2011 at 9:11 pm

    What a great story, good luck Mia with love Mary

  37. Ecarg says:
    April 6, 2011 at 11:13 pm

    Whilst reading your story I got to go on a little journey of my own! Can’t wait to see where you go next…
    x

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