Coloured Beans
William Dadds Age 6
Wimbledon NumberWorks’nWords
One day I went camping with my best friend Simon. We found a spot in a big forest. It was dark and scary.
That night we decided to go exploring. On the way back we found some coloured beans that shone so brightly.
We decided to plant them outside the tent.
In the morning a big surprise was outside our tent. It was a big green beanstalk.
We climbed up and saw a castle at the top. Inside there were sweets and gold.
Simon filled a bag up and I helped.
A giant chased us down the beanstalk but he was too big and went back up.
We were so rich.
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Lovely story. The writer uses connectives and quite a few descriptive words making this a very exciting read.
What a fantastic and exciting story. Well done William.
really nice story william loved the bit of finding sweets as well as gold
What a fantastic imagination
Your a little star william
Well done, William, that’s a lovely story and it sounds like the camping was quite an adventure. What fun it must have been to find a bean, plant it and get sweets and gold as a result.
I really enjoyed your story William. You have obviously put a lot of effort in to writing it.
What a lovely story. What an exciting adventure with your friend Simon and a wonderful happy ending!
What a wonderful story! I look forward to reading about more exciting adventures with Simon.
What a lovely story, very talented for a 6 year old.
Jacob and I read your story together. I think you have descibed a wonderful picture. What a clever boy! Ros.
It was fabulous! I gave you a 10. Jacob aged 6.
well done great story
What a great story William, I loved reading about your adventure with Simon.
What a lovely story William! Well done! Sofia and family
Top little man, like the story, i wanna go camping with you in future. keep up the excellent work.